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Old 25 Apr 2007, 11:44
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Default Flight

Flight
A daring vacation from the sky,
Shatter and break the corporeal chains
succumb to the enticing, the lust,
the charm, the seduction of green
grass.

Radical colours of a tingy red,
electric blue and blinding
yellow.

420! 420! Hurrah! 420! 420!
**** the Government as copper coats
are scattered on enlightened streets.
Push the gear, defeat the fascist
fear.

Coffee beans, white powder unknown
pills drowned in consoling
sins.

karma, meditation, short cuts
to peace. High in the sky
robins fly. Transform and gaze down
forever. Goddamn conformist
pigeons.

Yellow stars, White moon, the blazing red
neighbour painted over an electric blue
sky.

Look up, look up robins. Hunting
for grass will affix your gaze
to the ground, never to rise
above the earthly skies. Go
high!



i got my friend to read it... he gave me amazing points to improve upon. I am hoping to get the same critic and reception here for improvement. Thanks
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good work...
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excellent~!
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