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Old 03 Feb 2007, 10:14
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Fallen

In a world of no hope,
I lay stranded within myself,
lost in a downward spiraling slope.

The walls close in on me with speed,
never caring how it pains me so
as I shake and plead.

My life ends in a snap,
no more than a second
before I feel my bones crack.

Before me lies a bright tunnel,
but suddenly it blinks out
sending me down a dark funnel.

In a world of no hope,
I lay stranded within myself,
lost in a downward spiraling slope.

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Whacha think?
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Waves and wind clash around me
A top a pillar of stone I cling
Hoping for a hand
To reach down from the heavens
And save me from
the terror that gloams before me

Once I stood proud
Shoulder to shoulder with my brethren
Crimson and gold my armor shined once
Bright in the sunlight

And yet now I am trodden
Like the earth below me
Clashed and tattered
Like the cape surrounding me
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SUGOI!!
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Kyouya: You guys...
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Haruhi: Geeze.
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Haruhi: See you tomorrow!
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Fallen

In a world of no hope,
I lay stranded within myself,
lost in a downward spiraling slope.

The walls close in on me with speed,
never caring how it pains me so
as I shake and plead.

My life ends in a snap,
no more than a second
before I feel my bones crack.

Before me lies a bright tunnel,
but suddenly it blinks out







sending me down a dark funnel.

In a world of no hope,
I lay stranded within myself,
lost in a downward spiraling slope.

----

Whacha think?
like it
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wow i like this one
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It is so awesome
Loved it!
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