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Old 30 Jan 2007, 06:21
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Default Loneliness

This I wrote at a time when the company of my friends and family were not enough and I met my very special girl.

My loneliness is like a bottomless pit
in which I’m falling
and every person I meet
a ledge that I can reach.
But each time I get a hold, I seem to slip
Each time, further and further from everyone.

Yet now again the wall draws near
with a ledge in my reach.
Hesitantly I’ve stretch closer and closer
till I see its you
and the same questions in my head break through.

Will you be slippery?
And gradually ease me back into my loneliness.
Will you draw back?
And let me plummet.

Or will you draw near?
Create my foundation, let me hold on, stop my decent,
ease this pain called loneliness.

Will you allow me to share in your smile, laughter and beauty?
Share in your emotions and passion?

Will you allow me to embrace you when you’re sad or in pain?

Dedicated to
Lee-Ann
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Old 30 Jan 2007, 11:42
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Default Re: Loneliness

ooh dedicated... needs a little refinement but the point is very clear and solid.
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Old 17 Mar 2007, 03:45
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got a deep meaning to it
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Old 26 Apr 2007, 09:31
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Default Re: Loneliness

this is pretty good.
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Old 01 May 2007, 09:03
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Default Re: Loneliness

Quote:
Originally Posted by Erosant View Post
This I wrote at a time when the company of my friends and family were not enough and I met my very special girl.

My loneliness is like a bottomless pit
in which I’m falling
and every person I meet
a ledge that I can reach.
But each time I get a hold, I seem to slip
Each time, further and further from everyone.

Yet now again the wall draws near
with a ledge in my reach.
Hesitantly I’ve stretch closer and closer
till I see its you
and the same questions in my head break through.

Will you be slippery?
And gradually ease me back into my loneliness.
Will you draw back?
And let me plummet.

Or will you draw near?
Create my foundation, let me hold on, stop my decent,
ease this pain called loneliness.

Will you allow me to share in your smile, laughter and beauty?
Share in your emotions and passion?

Will you allow me to embrace you when you’re sad or in pain?

Dedicated to
Lee-Ann
like it
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Old 01 May 2007, 11:55
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Cool Re: Loneliness

beautiful, you know what its about the moment you get to the middle and it has a nice ending great work
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Old 02 May 2007, 06:27
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wow...
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Default Re: Loneliness

great illustration but the wording could use a little more polishing..=)
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I really like it... some passages are just cool
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