Expression

[Glitterby]

I realize what an outcast I am
I don't conform to the corporate plan

You kick me when I'm down
I feel like a dying animal facedown

Stranded amongst society
With the vultures flying around me

Where is the community?
Where is the harmony?

Sharing is charity
Caring is jeopardy

I'm nothing but American garbage
Because I don't buy it's mirage

F*ck your credit cards
F*ck your cable charge
F*ck your legal drugs
F*ck your corporate thugs

[TFAtarter7]

harsh but not bad

[kurosaki]

lol in terms of poetry devices... very nice
otherwise overfilled with the media interpretation and a very big bias. some valid points: etc. charity and stuff but still there is a bias. remember a colony is made of ants... ants are not made up of a colony. similarly corporations are made of people working, people are not made of corporations. ponder upon this and see who really is at fault.
anyways heres my response as well: one of my works:

Poor Bias

The law is made for the rich
we shall chant that day and night
chant until the suits cringe
chant until we get our rights.

We will not ask how they got rich
we will only continue to bitch,
about our low jobs,
about our lack of motivation.

The problems we have are not our cause,
they were made by the ones in power.
We will demand more, but give less
We are only doing it for everyone's best.

Hear us chant! Hear us scream
Let us give our problems to the rich
and still continue to complain about
how we never achieved the American dream.

Give us more, give us more
try to fill our neverending hole
hunger, money, fame, power
are what we devour.

We are the lower social class
the law is made for the rich
we are joining together in a mass,
and we will fix every glitch.

[Skeclipse]

Originally Posted by TFAtarter7

harsh but not bad

i agree, it has poem language but some words realy beats you up