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kurosaki · #1 (**permalink**) 06 Nov 2006, 11:10

My world

I wish I could create
a world thats like a fairy tale
with dwarves working thier mines
and mischievious elves meddling with time.

There shall be a divine river
where beautiful fairies hover
and innocent men spend thier lives
romancing thier would-be wives.

It would be on the eve of dusk
when all creatures begin to lurk
and many bright and moving small lights
blanket the river, as they were fireflies

Twindling, buzzing and jumbling around
making sure there is no one that cannot be found.
And in the depths of the woods,
that surrounded the river like a hood
were a couple, frolicking around
lost in the spring of youth, not wanting to be found.

Young fish swim the stream up and down
and a mother frog guards her tadpoles with a smile, not a frown.

Two quiet owls hoot at night
never leaving each others' sight.
Little insects scurry here and there
lost in thought, of who is what and what is where?

A little marsh there would be
and a waterfall, the river would lead.
A pond is formed after the waterfall storm
upon which a yellow moon reflects,
brimming with life that all creatures respect.

Higher it rose, the yellow moon
watching over the sleeping loons,
by the end of the river
upon which the fairies hover.

As I dream of this wonder
I couldn't help but sadly mutter,
"This world of mine,
will be born after my time."

spirited_soul · #2 (**permalink**) 20 Nov 2006, 06:36

This really good. Keep writing you are talented

darkness_nights · #3 (**permalink**) 24 Nov 2006, 02:32

nice if only i could write like you but my ideas dont follow out.

Exile_in_ivory_tower · #4 (**permalink**) 29 Nov 2006, 05:51

That's a pretty darned nice doodle you've got yourself there, if you really want to perfect it sit down in a couple months and streamline it; it's the hardest part for me, I get too embaressed.