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Old 27 Aug 2006, 15:07
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Sitting in my living room
Suddenly sounds came from nowhere
It’s like the sound of doom
The balcony’s calling out for my name

And I have to look at this and stare
Opened the windowpane and went outside
Now I’m on the balcony
But no one was there and the pane went SHUT!!!

Going on this of an infernal ride
Stared at the world
And it was burning
I see people dying

What’s going on in here?
The world is burning before my eyes
I saw everything in this darkness
The moon is staring at me in guilt
Inside the world of sin, I’m locked

(Solo 1)5

Stared behind me
And I’m can’t see my house anymore
Now, in a land and stare in terror
Seeing myself as the devil in me

I saw blood on my hands
Can’t figure where they came from
There’s a cottage in front of me
Through the window, I glance

Group of people, faceless they move and dance
Suddenly, I felt asleep and going for a snooze

“Nightmare 1:

(Raindrop
Raindrop
Falling upon me
Raindrop
Raindrop
Turning to blood
Raindrop
Raindrop
Falling upon me
Blood drop
Blood drop
On the knife in my hand
The knife was mine) x 2

Stabbing
Stabbing
Within your flesh
Stabbing
Stabbing
I don’t know who
Stabbing
Stabbing
My nightmare
To wake up, now”

(Solo 2)

Woke up from this nightmare
It felt so strange for me
The moon shines and I stare
And now I’m close to the sea

I don’t know how I got here
Suddenly, I felt this fear
I’m remembering my past
I sense magic will be cast

A ship from the sea came
And took me on a ride
Pirates are scaring my soul
One of them had hit me on the head

I fall on the ground and sleep

“Nightmare 2:

(She was with me for a long time
We used to be in love
I felt her sweet lips on mine
An angel from above
Dancing around
Singing together

This sweet dream had ended
With a nightmare and you were dead
You rose up like a ghost
You’re dead eyes were wide open
You’re staring at me and I am afraid
I was stabbed with a knife by you”

(Solo 3)

Memory is catching me
I started to remember my past again
It seems it was sweet
But something had turned it into hell

Visions of mine are becoming true
A certain feeling I used to love you
As this abyss, I think I have forgotten
Of this thing, that it was my ultimate sin

This might be a journey to remember
Telling me that I used to have someone I love
But I can’t recall enough of what had happened
Things are turning back in my head

Suddenly, a demon with a knife
Came from nowhere
It stabbed me within my flesh
And placed the knife in my hand

Falling on my knees
The demon had flee
Everything’s becoming cold

“Nightmare 3 (Final):

(Love was in the air in me and you
We were a great couple
Nothing will tear us apart
Except for me
The demon that gave me the knife
Had me to come and stab my wife
She’s lying there on the balcony
That I left to this trip of unknown
This vision was my past
These nightmares were all my past
IT WAS MY PAST…NNNNNNNNNOOOOOO!!!!”

(Solo 4)

I’m the man without a face
I’m the pirate of that ship
I’m the demon that stabbed myself
And now I know my infernal past

I killed my beloved on my balcony
This trip had me to remember my crime
It wasn’t a happy symphony
And I know I had did and killed the time

(Chants)

(Solo 5)

Stabbed her in the flesh
And I’m back from that trip
I feel the guilt is growing on me
I hide my face in my hands

Regretting the thing that I’ve done
The past was dreadful for me
All for a sudden, her eyes appeared in the mist
Staring at me and I felt that I am scared

On the balcony, I’m being walking backwards
And I drop from it
And I’m feeling that I am falling forever
But she kept on staring at me while I fall

My house is one floor from the ground
But it seems that I am FALLING FOREVER
I’m falling forever
I’m falling forever
With these eyes staring at me
I’m falling forever
I’m falling forever
I’m falling forever
I'M FALLING FOREVER!!

NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

These devilish eyes are upon me
While I fall into eternity
I'M FALLING FOREVER!!!!
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Old 23 Oct 2006, 03:47
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Default Re: Balcony by Simonitro

what a ballad poem ! it make me think . This is a great story . The way you write it . Your style is great.
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It is good... text puts you to think... I like it
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Old 03 Nov 2006, 02:35
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very nice
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I liked the beginning quite a bit, good work.
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Old 03 Nov 2006, 18:36
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i can't believe i just read all of that.. lol
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