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23 Apr 2007, 08:12
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Wow...
Carnage, this is a really awesome story, dude. 
What is boredom to one, is nothing short of joy to another. :]
Keep it up, bro. 
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23 Apr 2007, 10:49
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i am still working on it and not all names are going in it just a few
Emostar the Savage, is a great and powerful leader. He is skilled and all arts of war. It is rumored that his brilliant warfare can defeated an army of thousands with just a handful of men himself.
Daz the Wise, is a powerful creature not from this plane. His true motives are unknown.
Whoei the Observer, is an epic hunter from the northern city Vangnee . In his land he is a hero for alone he hunted a ended a dragons rage on his home.
Liegeoman the Construct, is a stone golem created to guard an ancient temple.
Bold Funes, is leader of Princess Syi mighty army. He is a loyal servant of the princess . With great bravery and honor he defends the city of Navner.
Gloominess FrozenFury, his mastery of the dark magic makes him a great boon in Princess Syi court
Robust LeParkour, is a brute orc from the land of Shrree. He nearly gave his life to find a mystic amulet that released a hex upon Princess Syi .
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23 Apr 2007, 12:39
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nice bravo mate is it going to be a epic series like the dragon lance novels where from time to time you post another chapter in the ongoing tale
as this could make quarrel very popular
and question the names in the first page of the tale who in medi are they as some of the names i not familiar with
or are they just story guiding elements to start the tale off 
oh duh soz being tired i just clued in haha they mentioned when ya log out the great racial leaders 
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23 Apr 2007, 13:24
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i think your story need's Angel in it to spice it up a little more....not thats its not great already but more the better
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23 Apr 2007, 16:49
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nice story :P its going to take u ages to include every1 hehe :P
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23 Apr 2007, 21:57
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lol.. I like the part about me, very true and exciting! Keep up the good work..
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24 Apr 2007, 00:23
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I like it Venom 
Nice job
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Bold Funes, is leader of Princess Syi mighty army. He is a loyal servant of the princess . With great bravery and honor he defends the city of Navner.
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LOL yeiiiiii you can also put that he knows no fear! very quiet and says not much!... but when it comes to Princess SYI he has a lot of things to say! not only for his own honor! but for hers too!  GO SYI! |
25 Apr 2007, 03:45
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y isnt there a :
dAbaIa the tramp, he lives in holes with rats, tho the chicks dig him eventhough (it is true tho)
gf boredom, nais story
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Man as i read your stories they just get more and more interesting... i hope that some day (when i have a spiffier name perhaps ) that i could possibly be in one of your tales... truly magnificent work. An imagination that of which even the massively magnificent Terry Brooks would gawk at.  |
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