Hmmm yes, I agree with Gwydion. I think with some work this could look good, but it seems there is too much going on in there. You have a rather hard on the eyes background, which you can pull off with some work. You also have seme tech, which I was never a big fan of, either a little bit or everything. And then you have a hard to read text. I can tell you have talent, but this particular sig needs some tweeking done IMHO.
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