Sinners and Soldiers - Song I'm working on

[TheUnforgiven1]

Alright, so heres a little something I came up with. I've been really into song writing lately, and wanted to know what everyone thought of this piece. Please lemme know


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Sinners And Soldier

You fire your arm to protect their rights!
kill them and lose your sight towards the light

They call you a hero
But deep down inside
you're a little more then a soldier
a little less then a winner

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Sinners and Soldiers
Find the light in the wrong
As you look to the sky
Find the prayer in your lies!

Hardly a hero
more then a soldier
less then a winner
the path of a sinner

Keep on fighting

lose sight of the light

keep on sinning

go on hero, save thier rights


They call you a hero
But you know the truth
You're more then a soldier

there's a sinner within